I really liked your story it’s sharp, witty, and full of charm! The mix of supernatural weaponry, Yakuza politics, and clever banter between characters like Marco, Amanda, and Merle shows so much potential. The tension around Roland Li, the necromancer ray guns, and the arms dealing mystery makes *More Trouble in Little Japan* a thrilling read. I actually have an idea for your story and would love to collaborate with you!
I really liked your story it’s sharp, witty, and full of charm! The mix of supernatural weaponry, Yakuza politics, and clever banter between characters like Marco, Amanda, and Merle shows so much potential. The tension around Roland Li, the necromancer ray guns, and the arms dealing mystery makes *More Trouble in Little Japan* a thrilling read. I actually have an idea for your story and would love to collaborate with you!